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Dark Poetry #3
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xEmperorEmber
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since 2000-03-28
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tx
0 posted 2001-07-15 12:19 PM

everyday grinding into a new phase of flesh
welcoming the hazing of a technological society
the grazing of everything inside of me
waste it all until there is nothing
welcome the sun that hates you
look at the way it all falls apart
it corrodes itself before you even start
this never ending vicious cycle
just to build the perfect circle
this place is falling apart
i hate us so much
conservation was never the key
i hate people
so stay away from me
© Copyright 2001 Jimi Hendrix - All Rights Reserved
EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
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Between a laugh and a tear...
1 posted 2001-07-15 02:39 AM

Ok! I'll stay away, just wanted to say I loved that first line!
xEmperorEmber
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tx
2 posted 2001-07-15 06:10 AM

Thanks
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