Dark Poetry #3 |
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Somewhere |
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K2001 Junior Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 31Near manchester in England |
Somewhere she cries, no one knows why. Inside she dies, she wants to fly. Freedom is far, shes scared to lose. Never asked, no chance to choose. Shes so alone in the world, afraid. Of the wounds inside, the ones he made. Scars so deep, theyre hard to find. Secrets so cruel theyre locked in her mind. Where does she go? What will she do? Will she tell them? Anyone? You? "Keep the faith"-Jon Bon Jovi |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
So hauntingly sad. I hope someone was there to listen? Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
ok seriously this has gotten weird, you have shared so many of the same things i have. it is so sad to know someone else has the same feelings, and somehow comforting to know that i am not alone--and neither are you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is a good clear expression of your feelings...James |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yea for soo long I prayed that i would no longer be alone in all this, but now that i'm hearing about everyone with the same experiences as me, I pray that no more will have to go through all this! LOVE ELMOIE <3 |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
What a sad poem ![]() It was very beautifully written though. you did a wonderful job expressing your feelings. LadyPeach1 |
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Jeen Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 91 |
This is a great poem. It strikes a chord in those of us who know. Jeen |
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K2001 Junior Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 31Near manchester in England |
Thanx evry1 |
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