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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
This is the sweetest poem I have ever written and it is so heartwarming. Drifted into a fantasy, Longing for it to come true, Sweet dreams of being together, Forever, just me and you, Together forever, Always hand in hand, Flying together forever, Into our fantasy land, I will never let go, I will never leave you, Our love we can share together, Everything will always seem brand new, We will never get tired of looking into each others eyes, And stating our undying love, For you are my true love, my only sweetheart, My angel sent from above, I never want to lose this happiness, This love that keeps us together, I will always see you in my sweet dreams, I will always love you forever, The times we will share, The love will never Die, I will love you forever and faithfully, Together You and I... [This message has been edited by LadyPeach1 (edited 07-09-2001).] |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Yes a lovely poem indeed. Its always nice to have thoughts like this about someone. I wish you all the luck! And if ya know of any with brothers..... ummmmmmmmmm send them my WAY!  Mags Don't fear your tears! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I agree, lovely thoughts. Take care! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Tasin Ray Junior Member
since 2001-07-02
Posts 11TX, USA |
A beautiful, well-written poem. Sounds to me like your friend is a very lucky man. -- The soul defines who you are...The eyes are the window to the soul: We will never get tired of looking into each others eyes, And stating our undying love, For you are my true love, my only sweetheart, My angel sent from above, soulmate? You too have a definite talent. It is very obvious here in this peice. By the way, thank you for your kind words. Tasin "In this very breath that we take now lies the secret that all great teachers try to tell us." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This IS sweet...and a dream that I share with you...smiles to you, this caught my eye, for that is what I always say: "dream sweet". A nice dance of a poem lovie! |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
This is SOOOOO sweeeet!!!  I loved it!!  What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
sweet indeed...i wish i could write like this.../Drew/ |
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kris2316 New Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 6 |
this is a very heart warming poem!!! I wish you the best of luck, and i hope it turns out the way your poem words it! Good Luck, and keep up with the great poetry! kristin  |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
Everyone, Thank you so much for your support, kind words and all the wonderful feedback! I really enjoy coming to a place such as piptalk and being commented on how well I do on my work. You all are so wonderful. thank you so much for the encouragement. LadyPeach1 |
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