Dark Poetry #3 |
Deep Within Me |
Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
I honestly meant for this to go in here instead of Teen so if it gets deleted I understand. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Go through the inside Search deep within me Find what I hide Let me know what you see Don't fear my heart Even if it appears evil Give me a new start Let my past conceal Help purify my soul Don't allow the black to seep back in Ignore the hollow hole It's only from the sin Where ever I may go Come with me alone My truth no one shall know You musn't portray what I've shown 4/23/01 What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is so intimate and sincere...truly a loving write, filled with sheer bravery of soul baring. Thank you...I enjoyed this much. |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
yes truly sincere....good write../Drew/ |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
This was a nice one Jess. Was this written back when you were feeling...you know? I only ask because of this line: "It's only from the sin." I know I've said this before, but it wasn't your fault, regardless of what those freaks said. You couldn't help what happened. Again, a great poem chica. I love you. *hugs* -Adam Of all the things that I confess, |
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