Dark Poetry #3 |
Alternative |
Tasin Ray Junior Member
since 2001-07-02
Posts 11TX, USA |
Enclosed from society to create a reality to fill this empty space of time, again to end hold me now but wait till tomorrow hold me down drown away my sorrow They say that these eyes are the windows to my soul deaf to my own cries lost in life's balck hole you can save you can create me you have given me all I see so please hold me shape and mold me so that I can be... Because I fell in love with the green of the earth and the stars up in the sky. And I saw the flowers through their birth and felt the rain fall from heaven's sky. And I saw the world that was made to unfold my own destiny. With you right there with open arms to guide me through this raging sea. please... hold me now don't wait until tomorrow take me now away from this sorrow "In this very breath that we take now lies the secret that all great teachers try to tell us." |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Very nicley done! Let Nature be your guide, and one will never get lost. |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
I have fallen in love with your work. I have read three of your poems and you have just such a powerful, amazing, and rare talent. Great job once again!! LadyPeach1 |
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