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Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

0 posted 2001-07-01 01:03 PM

Sometimes I feel so good just touching you,
Then you flinch,

Sometimes I need you to lean on,
But you just let me fall,

Sometimes I just want to cry on your shoulder,
Then you back away,

Sometimes I want you to hold me,
But you won't,

Sometimes I can trust you with everything,
Then you lie again

Sometimes I want someone to listen to me,
But you can't hear,

Sometimes I need you with me,
Then you leave me alone

Sometimes I try to say "I love you",
But you get angry at me for saying it too much,

Gin
June 2001

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"-NIN
"There is no always forever"-The Cure
"Even the losers get lucky some times"-Tom Petty

Phreak
Junior Member

since 2001-04-11

Posts 26

1 posted 2001-07-01 01:43 PM

I think I am currently dating "that guy"...that guy who has been hurt and wont let anyone in. It hurts, I know.

You really expressed yourself well here

This is a great poem.

"I woke you up and I slit the throat of your confidence, and we laughed in the night and I felt alright" (3EB)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-07-03 05:58 AM

Enjoyed reading this...James

CrEaTuRe
Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia

3 posted 2001-07-04 04:00 PM

well expressed .... i was with a guy like that .... hang in there if you think he is worth it or else heck dump him .... it hurts like hell being treated like that

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

4 posted 2001-07-07 12:23 PM

that is so sad :-(
I hate when men are like that... some can be such dogs. be happy!

LadyPeach1

K2001
Junior Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 31
Near manchester in England

5 posted 2001-07-09 10:50 AM

Hi, i like this. I have a poem called sometimes which is quite similar, its about appearing to be one thing but infact being something else. I really liked this, xxxx

illusion
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 296

6 posted 2001-07-10 11:39 AM

I know that guy, too - and the hurt that comes from loving him. You've expressed it very well.

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

7 posted 2001-07-11 10:36 PM

Yeah so i date that guy. but he isnt like this all the time. he is just that way when he is sad or other things are bothering him. but usually he is the greatest guy and i love we just have hard times. as does everyone, this about the hard times.

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

8 posted 2001-07-15 02:43 AM

Familar feelings you've expressed here. But then on the other side I think I've been that guy too......

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