Dark Poetry #3 |
I know I must tell you .... |
Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
If I looked deep into your eyes And held your hand so tight Then explained how much I love you Would the sun still shine bright? Would the stars still glimmer Through the white of your eyes Would the sun still shine over me Drying up the tears I once cried Would the ocean still look peaceful With no storms in the way Knowing I have these feelings Would you run or would you stay? Would the rainbows still sparkle With all the colors of your heart With the gold at the end Knowing they'll never part *SIGH* I know I must tell you How much you mean to me With the warmth of your soul My heart I must free So take this as my confession Or my vow to love thee Watching the love blossom Is all I want to see Don't fear your tears! |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Oh how i wish i could do this one thing you speak of. This is a wonderful poem, and touched me right. There's a peace inside us all |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
This is lovely! And the sigh was just in the right spot - I too sighed then! Take care may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Don't spend your life wondering! I enjoyed this one, take care! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Fallen Angel of Darkness Junior Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 26Among the Shadows |
When this situation arises, it is always difficult to just say what you are feeling. It has always been my philosophy, however, to just go for what you want and admit your feelings. I'd rather be let down (or shot down depending on the guy) early and have the time to heal than let it drag out wondering and never quite knowing... I hope you find the right time and courage to tell him. Good luck. Oh, by the way, your poem was wonderful ~* Megs *~ I love the lines some men use to get us into bed. "Please, I'll only put it in for a minute." What am I, a microwave? — Beverly Mickins [This message has been edited by Fallen Angel of Darkness (edited 07-09-2001).] |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
I like this - good luck with the telling. |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
so i dated this guy, my current boyfriend actually. and when i first feel in love with him i didnt want or know how to tell him, but i did at first it was rough and we broke up a few times because he was scared. but now after a year of i love yous we are so happy. so if you feel this way trust your heart it usually wont mislead you |
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Simkus New Member
since 2001-07-11
Posts 5North Carolina, USA |
That beautifully decribes the way i feel about one of my best friends. But as the years pass the further we get. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I still like it! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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