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Dark Poetry #3

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LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

0 posted 2001-06-29 09:37 AM

She was all alone,
she was caught in a moment of despair,
Her broken heart is beyond repair,
No one to love her,
Not a soul to call her own,
she never wants to go back,
she never wants to go home,
Struggling to find her way out of this madness,
Crying herself to sleep,
She never smiles, she never has fun,
she just constantly weeps,
Because of the sadness in her heart,
That has left her in despair,
This innocent life is shattered,
and her heart is left beyond repair.

This was a shorty! LadyPeach1

[This message has been edited by LadyPeach1 (edited 06-29-2001).]

Phreak
Junior Member

since 2001-04-11

Posts 26

1 posted 2001-07-01 11:27 AM

"Because of the sadness in her heart,
That has left her in despair,
This innocent life is shattered,
and her heart is left beyond repair"

Well, I'd like to imagine that this pain has strengthened her heart and did not made it weaker. In the wise words of Neitzche "What does not kill us makes us Stronger".

Awesome, powerful poem. Write on!

"I woke you up and I slit the throat of your confidence, and we laughed in the night and I felt alright" (3EB)

[This message has been edited by Phreak (edited 07-01-2001).]

K2001
Junior Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 31
Near manchester in England

2 posted 2001-07-09 10:59 AM

wow!! great poem. hits home hard.

Fallen Angel of Darkness
Junior Member

since 2001-01-17

Posts 26
Among the Shadows

3 posted 2001-07-09 11:19 AM

Yet another wonderful poem!  This piece describes a part of my life down to the very last detail.  These moments are always the hardest.

I hope you find your way though.  The madness and turmoil may have the upper hand at the moment, but if you keep fighting, you will be the one who is controlling it.

Keep fighting and stay strong.

~* Megs *~

I love the lines some men use to get us into bed. "Please, I'll only put it in for a minute." What am I, a microwave?
— Beverly Mickins

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