Dark Poetry #3 |
The Apostle in Triumph (fifth and last) |
Lethe Junior Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 36Blackforrest |
THE APOSTLE IN TRIUMPH In solitude I wander.... Through the vast enchanted forest The surrounding skies are one Torn apart by the phenomenon of lightning Rain is pouring down my (now) shivering shoulders In the rain my tears are forever lost The darkened oaks are my only shelter Red leaves are blown by the wind An ebony raven now catches my eye Sitting in calmness Before spreading his black wings Reaching for the skies In this forest Where wolves cry their agony unto the moon My spirit is hidden In the form of wisdom carved on a black stone The only way to follow Open your soul Redeem, I am immortal Blinded by a light My soul is held up in glory I engulf the skies The apostle in triumph Through the eternal flame I travel As the rain keeps falling.... [This message has been edited by Lethe (edited 06-11-2001).] |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, This is most powerful peice I enjoyed reading it so much that I am putting you and this poem into my library. I really, really, really enjoyed it! Simply superb, keep up the great work. Until your next masterpeice -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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TheGreatMango Junior Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 17Louisana, USA |
what a wonderful poem it was so refreshing allmost work like that always seems to lift my spirits |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I like the imagery. |
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