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The Rage
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The Rage |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
Every time I feel the rage coming, like a silent storm racing through our world. And every time it leaves me crying, each tear a reminder of what was. Our world, taken from us so harshly, so beautiful, is now lost. The two of us, left alone in the darkness, our arms reaching out for each other, our eyes reaching out for sweet light. P.L.U.R. |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
Rage always is a terifying emotion, no matter the trigger. You sum this up quite well here. I like this poem a lot.  I can't control |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
The two of us, left alone in the darkness, our arms reaching out for each other, i love this line.. maybe because it conveys hope.. we all need hope.. and love.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this leaves me with many different thoughts..situations..not spelled out but all felt deeply ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
DJLI, I too felt many things while reading this poem. I liked the line about silent storms and the one about arms reaching out, they provided a genuine contrast, and gave the edges of it a softness. Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
This is a REALLY good poem!!! Very good! |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was so full of emotion...wonderful  I really enjoyed it hun adn keep those poems comin! |
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