Dark Poetry #3 |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
Goodbyes are always sad, But forever they are not. Even though I'm empty now, I must cherish what I've got. God took you away, To the sweet heavens above. He the best angel, To spread the gift of love. Sometimes I may cry, Because I miss you so much. I know your forever with me, But I want to feel your touch. One day i will be with you, And never will we part. But for now you are in heaven, And forever in my heart |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Ashley, So sad to lose a loved one, it's painful and just doesn't seem fair or right.When I think of a lost loved one I always remember this quote from the telemovie 'True Women' - "It's not our loved ones that make our lives. It's the loving them that does. And distance or death cannont take that away. We have it in our hearts - forever." *hugs* Isis *Enlightenment is within all things* |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
A beautiful display of love and the coping of loss. Take care, With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
A Wonderful poem, you cature the feeling of loss so well in the structure and language! Very good poem I loved it! Hope you're OK! ^*~KickingKim~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
Heavens angel, That was a BEAUTIFUL poem! I really really feel like it related to my poem which I just posted yesterday titled "Forever..." This poem really related to it, and it was a beautiful poem! I enjoyed it so much. LadyPeach1 |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Beautiful ![]() Temptress*Moon
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
HeAvEnS AnGeL, This is so real and well presented as well *HuGS* Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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