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a-alibaster
Member

since 2000-01-08

Posts 392

0 posted 2001-05-20 11:02 AM

...and warm liquid slips
down dry lips
as I dream in violent
hues of perfect velvet.
I am dieing
as cold breath escapes, lying,
with soul rushing out, sighing.
...and cold liquid slips
past rotting fingertips
as I leave behind wilted rose petals
upon the black soil as grave settles.
...and silence falls
as my sweet lover, Death, calls
with silent voice, fridged,
while we dance
into oblivions untold intolerance.

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

Swamp¤Faeryie
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)

1 posted 2001-05-20 05:19 PM

This is completely amazing... it's DEFFINATELY going to my library,i love it esp.
"as my sweet lover, Death, calls
with silent voice, fridged,
while we dance
into oblivions untold intolerance."
you have echoed my thoughts of late,i love it when i read something like this. It's beautiful in a terrible way,also inspiring,as well as inspired. Great Work!!

samantha¤

much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson

poni
Junior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 21
Nebraska

2 posted 2001-05-21 01:50 AM

how beautifully you pen darkness!

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2001-05-21 02:11 AM

you now inspire to start writing for the devil. Nice work

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2001-05-21 03:10 AM

Ahh...Affy..my Queen of darkness..to your passion for it, I bow with a grin.

I have only to learn from the best that is you, my friend.

a-alibaster
Member

since 2000-01-08

Posts 392

5 posted 2001-05-21 07:47 AM

...and I thank you all , if you find what I have written to your liking then I have accomplished my goal!! ...

...and maybe, just , it may be, that the devil guides my pen......LOL!

Temptress....and my words to you...if you are pleased then I am , within my dark soul, content...

Until...ali

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

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