Dark Poetry #3 |
father, a moment of your time |
Allstaria22 Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 83MN USA |
if I had but one moment of your time what would I say would tell you how you hurt me how you tore away my soul how now I can not love him because I fear too much of how I hate your justification of what you did coward that's what you are to ignore me for so long then reject me how I am you mean nothing too me yet your actions still clutch my soul in a unbreakable imbrace that never lets me forget that you the one man who was supposed to love me most never loved me at all. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Awe this brought a tear to my eye--I hope he relizes soon what a wonderful person you are b4 it's too late--great poem--LOVE ELMO<3 smile cause the whole world hurts |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
this was really sad. I I can sense your sorrow and I relate. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I understand. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
...wonderful write and I too understand completely. Until...ali "There is an alter ego which |
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poni Junior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 21Nebraska |
sorrow well penned! (hugs) |
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