Dark Poetry #3 |
Missing You |
G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
My body aches to be near you My flesh it yearns for your touch My ears they burn just to hear you My love I miss you so much My life is nothing without you Of that I'm quite aware My love I'll never doubt you If only I were there My soul it longs to be with you My heart it screams to be free Tell me what more I can possibly do To once again have you with me My days are filled with sadness And that my dear is true How can I stop the madness For all I want is you Please make your way back to me And all my quirks and charms Only my love is what you'll see When you fall into my arms G. A. WEBB Regret not that which you have done, |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
very nice...... i'd like to read more of your work, so off to the search engine -napalm
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allis4angel Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82Portugal |
I found it very beautiful. Congratulations. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
AWE that was wonderful & i know excactly how ya feel--my bf lives 4 hours away & he hung up on me last sat. & i haven't heard from him since--so i hope you get your love back LOVE ELMO <3 |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Lovely , heartfelt, and honost words, indeed... Until...ali "There is an alter ego which |
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poni Junior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 21Nebraska |
longing well penned! smiles |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Great write! Oh my gosh do I know this feeling well. *sigh* Keep em coming. Jenn "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Thank you all so much. I'm glad you liked this one. Unfortunatly the person I had in mind when I wrote this lives 8 times zones away in jolly old England (yes Lynn, you were right). The odds of me ever seeing her again are slim and none. So I'll just chalk this one (like so many other "love" poems I've written) up as wishful thinking. Anyways, thank you all again and take care. G Regret not that which you have done, |
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Captivating1 Junior Member
since 2001-06-07
Posts 15Houston, TX |
How did you know what I was going through?:-) Please keep 'em comin'... |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
Such a beautiful poem!! I liked it alot. LadyPeach1 |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Captivating1: I don't know, just psycic I guess...lol! I'm glad you liked it. Good luck and take care! LadyPeach1: And I thank you as well. I'm glad you liked it too. G Regret not that which you have done, |
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