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soulfulpoet
Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 42
ontario, canada
0 posted 2001-05-14 06:59 PM

Fragile


this tainted paradise,
has been suffocated endlessly.
deliberately burned to ashes,
crumbling into starkissed dust.
this lonliness lingers,
in a lifeless form
the entity is drained,
i see no reason to stay.
i want to leave
but something holds me back.
© Copyright 2001 Andrea - All Rights Reserved
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
1 posted 2001-05-15 07:23 PM

doesn't something always?

nice writing

K
Tough_Cookie
Junior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 13
USA
2 posted 2001-05-18 01:02 PM

I'm glad something is holding you back.
Maybe this ash will turn to beautiful soil, so that you may start over again.

TC
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