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Basking in The Shadows
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Basking in The Shadows |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
There's a dead spot On the lawn Under the tree That's where the sun Will never go And shouldn't be Where you and I Lay on the earth For God to see The brilliance that Our love did birth Our family G. A. Webb < !signature--> Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't [This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (edited 01-09-2001).] |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I like this. I don't know what is is, maybe the three line stanzas, but it's just a nice peaceful read. Joy |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
JOY 14: Well, whatever it was about this piece, I'm glad you liked it, thank you.  G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
this was very nice and peaceful |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Yes indeed, it was a very beautiful write. It took me back to the beauty of the first love feel. Good work, Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
An emotional holy spot, I really like the idea. Wonderful hon.. Isis *The heart of education is the education of the heart...* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Ginners, Dark_kisses_Within & Isis: Thanks! I find it interesting that I, of all people, created something considered "peaceful". Those who know me in person know that weather in love or hate I'm anything but peaceful. As a matter of fact, there may be a certain someone reading this right now who would agree with that statement…right Lynn…lol! Anyways, thank you all again. Take care all. G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Not very good at religious connotations, this one kind of stumped me. I re-read it and still can't get it  Sorry...Jerm "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
Hey you! Missed ya......and what a great poem! I loved it!! It has been too long since we have talked, I really must email you soon. How ya been? By your poetry I would say...still hanging in there, but things could be better? Cya soon.... |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
Ewww, pretties! I like... ~What is sometimes viewed as an ending, is often a new beginning.~ |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
firejerm: This is by no means meant as a religious piece. When I referred God, I meant it as in the world, the universe, the cosmos, what have you. This is no more than a fantasy for me and a rather bitter sweet one at that. For I know that there is not a single soul in this world who wants to share that spot under the tree with me. Therefore, I bask in the shadows…alone. That's what makes this piece a very "dark passion" for me. Something that I can see so clearly, but that is always dangled just outside of my reach. I hope that gives you some clarity. Thank you for taking the time to read this piece. Illusion: Hey you. Ya, it's been a while. I'm ok, thanks. How are you? I'm glad you liked this, thanks again. PoeticEnchantress: And one more BIG thanks to you. I'm glad you liked it as well. Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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