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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-05-08 04:54 PM

I seek him in the coldest nights,
Pleading for some relief,

Gaining no new answers,
I commemorate my loss,

The coldness creeps in,
Surrounded by resentment,

I have no use for him,
For he provides no answers,

I picture him being just like me,
But it isn’t the same,

His powers are vast,
For he created me,

But why then-
He decides to hate me?

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

1 posted 2001-05-11 08:40 PM

I really liked this alot actually. Personally i have no use for my fater, any maybe some day i will miss him, but as of now, i wish he would just vanish

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"-NIN
"There is no always forever"-The Cure
"Even the losers get lucky some times"-Tom Petty

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

2 posted 2001-05-12 10:23 PM

great expression of something that is so painful yet these days so sadly common. Where are all the fathers? I have seen my own once in my 26 yrs of being, great write, appreciated by as a child and as a writer.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2001-05-12 10:44 PM

THank you for connectiong your life to the words of mine.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

DJLI
Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 237
TN, USA

4 posted 2001-05-13 10:48 AM

I know where you're coming from. My father has no part in my life, and honestly, I wouldn't want him to. Good Job!

P.L.U.R.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

5 posted 2001-05-13 01:43 PM

I understand the pain and the hurt, but I also in a weird way thank him for bringing me in this world. It just seems that I left confused.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

6 posted 2001-05-13 07:23 PM

So sad, perhaps it all rests on how you look at him - ie. in what sense.. An unloving father, or simply a man that made you??
Isis

*Enlightenment is within all things*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

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