Dark Poetry #3 |
Despairs |
WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
Delving deeper, diving down, Eternal envy eyeing Something secret, something sound Pondering pensively, pining. Always aching all around; Instantly identifying Ready rigors reaching 'round, Seeking shame, so simplifying. Hey, this is my first try. *frowns* Whatcha think? < !signature--> ~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~ [This message has been edited by PoeticEnchantress (edited 01-16-2001).] |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
PoeticE, I'm enjoying the alliteration. It works rather well. Nicely done. But I think I'm missing something, it feels like two poems. Kraw' /:^)== =#== |
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