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Abrupt Awakening |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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No longer just a fantasy you had become a dream to me a ray of light that streaked through dark a hopeful arrow, left it's mark. Too late I learned it was not true and now there's nothing I can do Turned hopeless love, it still will stand throughout those miles across the land. Reunion of our hearts so real became a moment she would steal. Yet memories do haunt me still and you? I know someday they will. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Catalina, This is beautiful. And I'm sure he's being haunted by the memories, and he will face up to that one day. Love, Elise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I have seen this happen before...we don't always have the memory or the regrets at the same time but they do come...seems like the higher we are on our pride horse the harder we fall when that day finally takes control of us...James |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~They sure as heck will! Sandra,...fancy meeting you here.  . Keep writing, I enjoy your verses so. *Peace you. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes lost loves do haunt us, and found dreams become our reality to love us sometimes more than a love in the passing. missed you guys. and you to kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Just had to stop by and reply on this. Beautifull thing, as usual. Still can't shake him off, huh? Me too... Take care, wish you all the best. LM "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Sandra, Your insight never fails to amaze me. I like what you've expressed here.. thank you for sharing it with us all. Sheila |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
Very beautiful... if sad. ~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~ |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
beautiful write*S* I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
I enjoyed this it has an ethereal feel to it! haunting! *S* Z Life is an adventure to be experienced |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
You do sing such nice music! /:^)== =#== |
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