Dark Poetry #3 |
Falling Past Forever |
dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Falling Past Forever Last of the starlight glitters High within the Winter’s sky Low upon the ground I walk Beneath the blossomed moon. Horizon calls the traveler As the heart calls in pain I ache, I cry, my feet are moving Carrying me far past home. Dawn breaks with fiery fingers Reaching wide and deep within I walk along the dusty road Knowing that tomorrow lies ahead. Horizon calls the traveler As the heart calls in pain I ache, I cry, my feet are moving Carrying me far past home. And I am falling past forever May God find me somewhere I am falling past forever In the fading of the night. Joann Renee’ Muszynski 4/29/01 With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful! Sorry I have no better descriptions at present, but I felt the despair and confusion.... Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
The poetry seems to describe a confused and maybe a hopless soul looking above(to God) for answers. Great work. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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destiny502 Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 57OH |
i really enjoy your poems..after i read this one and When the Heart Falls i went and looked for others by you. Heather [This message has been edited by destiny502 (edited 05-03-2001).] |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
This was very good i liked it a lot "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Excellent writing, Dragonpoe, loved this! ~Tier |
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