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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas 
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I’ve sought to forget Yet always I remember An April day years ago Colder than December When life was lost In shades of red A slideshow playing In my head The searing ache The burning pain Etched in my memory Some how remain The lab technician looking grim A slight shake of the doctor’s head In one fleeting instant All of my dreams – dead The starkness of hospital rooms A nurse’s audacity to smile And say things’d get better It’d just take a little while Deprived of the joy Of perfect fingers and toes Left forever to wonder Only god knows I hate those words “It wasn’t yet a baby” because I know the truth I felt it move inside me A little while long past Five years have come and gone Yet still I feel the pain At the loss of my little one Yet even in the pain A sense of hope still lingers Because I know one day I’ll be counting an angel’s perfect little fingers! |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
ok wow is the only word to describe wut i just read i loved it hun you have an amazing talent i felt your pain i cant wait to read more of your stuff hun keep it up i love ya *hugs* ben redshaw the great i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
*hugs* i understand. tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I could never write such a beautiful piece on a such a great yet sad topic for I am a man. You did a wonderful job. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
StarrGazer: I really liked this one a lot. Your verses seem to flow really well, as well as your rhymes. You've done a good job both with technique and emotion here. I like it a lot. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Thanks you guys  I haven't been able to write in a long time and then it was like bam! suddenly I could finally write something |
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