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Frozen Time |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Time passes by- Summarily as the wind, Rumbling through history, Weeping in your inner mind, It stops progressing once, When you depart this place, That’s when you sense it, The establishment of the ending. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
hmmm i like this i think i'll put it in the library, it is a very interesting peice!! Have people not read it? There should be more replies,ah well. much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
One reply is enough to let me know that someone out their is reading it. I would not mind getting more replies.  Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Really enjoyed this one. I have read several of yours, and I like your style, abrupt, some what mysterious, and very thought provoking. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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coma_dream New Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 6 |
great poem !!! =) it was short, but I liked it... I admire people who can write short poems, mine are always a lot longer cuz I can't write short ones...it's not in my blood I guess ;-) thanks for let me reading it ! |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
definitely short but sweet ... guess it goes to show sommetimes a few words can have much more impact nice job! |
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