Dark Poetry #3 |
dark themes |
Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
troubled dreams of nightly themes demons of the night try and claim my soul life fills me with dread sometimes I even wish I were dead the pains of this world surround me and abuse me I cry out in pain as I start to bleed out like rain i wish that all the death would end I cry over all the agony and fear so i scream into the night "help me" i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
I can really relate to this right now... just wonder why night's demons are afraid to come out in the day time when I'm better equipped to deal ... nice job |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
thoughout provking poetry. Great work. I enjoyedthe following lines. I cry out in pain as I start to bleed out like rain Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
is not qutie sure what its about is it about evil envolping u? well the words and imagery was cool loves ya from me as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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never_a_princess Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 82Show Me the Money |
*grr-it* someone stole my "thought provoking" phrase..n~e~wayz..this one's shortish but it's well written and gets your *sad* point across, bennerz *likes* *hugz* ~Anna *waves* |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
This was a really spooky sounding poem, full of darkness. But I liked it. Very interesting. LadyPeach1 |
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Shadowdean Junior Member
since 2001-06-11
Posts 11Silver Spring, MD |
demons of the night try and claim my soul life fills me with dread I like that...I would love to see this poem expanded on..... "Victory can be anticipated, but not assured" |
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