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He Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 41 |
She the ocean maid her tides insight depths lifts foaming crests in eyes ascending She the words afar ears strain to hear but not mine the melody crystal She conjures all left for dead and earthly buried she knows me I am unveiled wonder turns radiant perceptions passion I am undone and remade in a single moment All has changed She fateful tears rends me burns to act if need defy worlds smiling impossibilities no more She cannot deny nor hold fast only face the wind damning distance time and home She the siren heart blood sinew soul and more every breath inspired the sum of all songs more than life more than hope the motive flame beyond mere time ahh Ithaca sweet home I see thy harbor glowing luminous close waves of time carry me home her arms She that is light |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and "He" can write!!! |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
YES HE CAN! This was wonderful!!!! I loved it and look forward to reading more! Sheila |
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He Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 41 |
Your kind words are very much appreciated. But I must say, the Inspiration for this is so profound the words were given. |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
That was really... touching. I felt that... ~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~ |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Spending the better part of my life on the water, "SHE" is known to me also. You have a very great way of expressing your self my friend, please continue. And the graphics are great, like a wind blown flag. Joel I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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He Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 41 |
My thanks to you both. But sir the She I speak of is flesh and blood. Divine in human garb, true. Tis the might, mystery and breath of the ocean, which pales beside, and surely doth envy, the unrivaled beauty and depths of her. Again my thanks. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I'll have to whisper here - since it's supposed to be impossible for me to be such... Still utterly wordless... There it is - I am still wordless... K [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 01-17-2001).] |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Welcome!  I smiled all the way through this... it was so beautiful Love the way you write... take care!~ Tara ~ may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
"She" must feel very honored to have such a wonderful piece of work dedicated to her. Beautiful and wistful. Enjoyed this VERY much! ~Sash~ |
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ThyWizard Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 56Chambersburg, PA, USA |
i am amazed, simply blown away by the sheer beauty of this piece dude. I absolutely loved this and i hope to read more from you in the future.< !signature--> " How can i feel if i can't breathe..." - Godsmack [This message has been edited by ThyWizard (edited 01-23-2001).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
He, Welcome. Absolutely stunning! Write on in song Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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He Junior Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 41 |
I thank you Words too kind to he who simply loves with all he is and ever hopes to be again my thanks. ............................ For She Hush please my love Let me sing my love in words uncautioned near or far asking only but to love you cherishing all and every moment hush now love tell me show me what else holds truth lives to breathe eternitys search revealed within and out the Ocean maid |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Dear He... I'm finding it hard to stay wordless... asking only...asking only... I know, my beautiful poet... K |
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mystic requiem Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144 |
Simply wonderful! Seems like lines in a play spoken by a lover. *S*   mYsTiC |
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