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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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Cutting out the hearts Pasting on the lace Sprinkling on the glitter While dreaming of your face This day is meant for lovers That mean so much to you Giving them your heart In all you say and do Showering them with roses A kiss here and there Maybe a diamond ring Showing them that you care A night on the town A dinner just for two Candles and wine Hoping they get the clue That the love you have for them Is as strong as it can be No one can take their place They are your eternity hmmmmmmmmm yet ....... Here I sit alone With no lover in my sight No kisses here and there No dinner by candle lite No roses in my arms No ring on my hand No midnight walks On the beach's sands No one to hold me close And wipe away my tears No one to share the night And chase away my fears If Valentines Day was meant To show your love so true What about us, single ones What are we suppose to do?  No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
such a lonely poem...it really is emotional...which is good...i hope your valentine calls soon lost in thought, found in words. wanderer |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know that I have experienced this so many times...I would pick my favorite of all the woman I know and buy her a card or a box of candy or whatever and perhaps it will soften her heart...there are always possibilities...never hurts to spread a little love...James |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Interesting question in this.... although, I think that the grass often looks greener from whatever side you're looking from..(I think that made sense... )..Anyway, I enjoyed this poem and I hope you find what you're seeking.Sheila |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Ok, I had to read this, seeing as how my birthday is Valentine's Day...call me Cupid...hehe!  I don't cellibrate V-day because it's my day. But I do find other ways to show the person I may be with how much I care. Although, I too find myself alone, with no one to share expressions such as are written in this piece. I know where you are, I am very familliar with this posission. Hugs to you my dear. Thanks for sharing. G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Dark-kisses-Within, Only one time can I remember having a Valenyines Day to really be happy about and that was because someone asked me to marry him, but ever sence then, "Oh it's just another day" Is the aswer when I ask if were doing anything so I don't know if it matters what side of the septic tank your on, but your poem was great and hoping and wishing for you the very best. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
Beautifully written but so sad ( I'm a hopelessly mushy romantic. When I read poems like this, they just tug at my heartstrings. lol It's been awhile since I've been single, but I know what it's like to feel "unloved". I have a suggestion. Why sit around and feel melancholy? Dress yourself up; go all out and treat yourself to whatever you think makes you look HOT! lol. Then lighten up your face with a beautiful smile and just go out. And I don't mean "out" like singles bars...just out in public...wherever... Smile at men..turn their heads..give yourself a big ego boost. And if you're daring enough, turn the tables on us men. Who says it's wrong for you to just come up to us on Valentines day and give us a valentine treat? Think of how much fun it could be to just go out and play the flirt without intending to necessarily "pick up" anyone. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Easy, Dark, it sounds like you are setting yourself up for a cry. Not that such a thing is all bad, but on V day? Rascalx seems to have the right idea. It's been my experience that when you aren't getting the emotional feedback that you need, you should try to give yours away and lighten someone elses day. It may help, and half is better than nothing. |
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