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Down Glass Lined Spiral |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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Down Glass Lined Spiral There are pieces of me, pieces that beg to be standing naked and broken, forsaken and alone before you, bowing for you. Slipping away down a glass lined spiral. Pieces of me missing flesh and bone, kneeling misunderstood and cold near you whispering to you with razor filled breath. Pieces of me bleeding quietly, laying silent and tattered starving for you. There are pieces of me. "There is an alter ego which |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I really liked this, i always like your work, but i thought this was great -Gin  "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Oh, yes...and sometimes, my friend, the pieces seem to be EVERYWHERE don't they? Gather them..is all I can say, and hold them close to you because they can often get lost in the grips of things you can't repair. Ahh, but am I making sense.  m'friend.. Nice writing.. still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
A dark piece, full of pieces. I liked this a lot, Ali. Great work.  "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Definitely a very dark piece...quite chilling...  K |
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