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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
I look for love But I get used I search for peace And get abused There's one thing now That is so clear No one wants To keep me near I find myself So worn and tired And my heart So uninspired With no love That I can see Because there's no one Meant for me With no more strength Now left to fight My will has vanished From my sight I can not take this One more day So in this world I will not stay Now when you see My empty stare Know that I No longer care For the flame was snuffed out Of my soul When my heart was cast In the black hole I hate this world I now confide 'Cause no one cares For tears I've cried With no more words Now left to tell I bid you all To go to hell G. A. Webb Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Ya, I was a little angry when I wrote this. Please don't anybody take this personally. Enjoy...lol.  G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Eek! This one has a sharp bite to it! I like. Take care of your heart. Good to see you pop in with a smile at the end. *Peace G. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Hey G !!!!! I liked this one. Reminds me alot of myself though. People tell me my stare has nothing behind it. I would tell ya that time heals but I havent gotten to that point either. Lean on me if ya need!! Nice write, Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
There are daze when this hits so home for me also. I just want to bite, rip and strip bone. but then there are other dazes... great way of putting it. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Yes! I loved it, know exactly how you're feeling! Wonderful, I can totally relate (sometimes...) Take Care! |
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Skoota Junior Member
since 2000-12-23
Posts 28Australia |
I love the poem, and don't worry, we won't take it personally. Unless it's meant for one of us? Nah. N/m Sim Come to me Kill for me Worship me. Follow everthing I do Act it out before me Godhead - The Reckoning |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
I have to say I really liked the ending to this one! It kind of came as a surprise.. the first part sounding so apathetic and depressed.. I liked the attitude you showed at the end.  Great write!!!Sheila |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
very nice, and very interesting, i enjoyed reading this |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
Well... you know that you have done your job right if you have even at least one person reply and say... you know that is exactly how i feel. And i was right there with you with every word. Thanks Carman |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
well...sometimes ya just gotta say what ya feel!  hugs, g"oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow.......I thought this one was amazing. I loved it, especially the ending. It's kinda like something I would write......yea but i encoperate a lot more cussing hehe. Anyway Wonderful job on this one! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Definitely something I can relate to right now. I love this too. Nice. |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
WOW!!! And here I thought that nobody was going to like this piece. As a matter of fact, I thought it would be booted due to a certain reference that is in this piece. But it didn't, so that's cool! I'm sorry to hear that so many of you feel (or have felt) the same way I do. I guess it's nice to know that I'm not alone. I'M FEELING MUCH BETTER NOW...LOL!!! But seriously folks, thank you so much for your comments. My e-mail is open to anybody who wants to talk, for I know where you'll be coming from. Thanks again! Take care all!!! G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I look for love but I get abused." This has kindof been the story of my life for the past few years, abused, used, lied to, deceived. But thats not the end of the story...I believe that I have found an honest woman...or did she find me...a woman that cares for me..so different from all the rest...we shall see...James |
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Fallen Angel of Darkness Junior Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 26Among the Shadows |
Kick ASS! Now that is what I a bitter slap! HA! I love it! (Mostly because I know what it's like to be where you are...I'm there right now). Your poem reminds me of the quote, "When life turns it's back on you, stand up and kick it in the ass." Seems like you're doing just that. ;-) Take care! ~* Megs *~ the Disheartened Fallen Angel "Those who are faithful know only the trivial side of love: it is the faithless who know love's tragedies." Oscar Wilde *~* Just because someon |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I love the ending. Good work. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
some of us are already there, but golly gee it sure helps to write about it doesn't it? Kathleen |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Ah, so much anger! Wrote many pieces much the same as this, brought me back to all the darkness I have had to overcome to be the person I am today. Get it out, my friend, get it all out! BTW, I like the poweful, in your face at the end, too. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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K2001 Junior Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 31Near manchester in England |
This is fantasic, i read it over and over and interpreted it into my own experiences, interpretation is such a wonderful thing!! I hope that whatever darkness inside inspired this is becoming lighter!! Love K. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Your feeling expressed here have been mutual as of late!! Thank you for showing me that I am not alone in my feelings! Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Oh man! I had no idea that this piece was going to strike such a cord in everybody. I'm glad you all liked it and am sorry that you feel the same way. I thank you all for your kind words and support and offer mine in return. Time doesn't always heal, but it dose lessen the pain. Take care all and thanks again! G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmm.... in a way I can kinda relate to this. Know the feeling. Take care. ~ Tara ~ may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift |
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