Dark Poetry #3 |
Searching for You |
a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Searching for You ...and I love with my mind while my heart belongs to another, a face I have never seen yet a longing so precious and clean. ...look into the eyes of one while I stare into an emptiness searching for the other yet never seeing what I long for. ...listening to words that form on lips while I read the others with my eyes trying to push down the feelings to pass them off as a lonely souls lies... "There is an alter ego which |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
a alibaster, the grass is not always greener on the other side, good poem though. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
I felt every word personally with this one.. Leave it to say, "I know the feeling well." Great expression, great write. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
PS, I caught a feel to this of fantasy, that maybe the other wasn't a specific person but rather a wish or want of a specific kind of person? That could just be my relation to the meaning. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Kethry, Your words are exactly why I never tread to the other side...things may look grand from a distance, but once you are standing there it may not be all it seemed. Many thank yous...ali D, Actually it was written about some one...yes, one of those fantasies that could be real if I really wanted, but is better left as it is now. I read you other inturpritation after I reread the poem and you are so right, it could be just as you stated. Many thank yous for understanding and for me knowing that I am not alone in my feelings...ali "There is an alter ego which |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*gasps* Dearest Affy...Sweetness, you have touched and gripped my heart with this. I do KNOW this and it only takes this short poem to render me breathless. Be well...and I agree..don't put all your heart into that other side either. It might come back with grass stains. (((HUGS))) still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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