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Katherine Chandler
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 280
Florida, USA
0 posted 2001-03-27 02:12 PM

Fear In The Night

~Pantoum~


Darkness returns
Fear in the night
The stomach churns
Beware of fright

Fear in the night
As darkness surrounds
Beware of fright
The mind resounds

As darkness surrounds
In shades of gray
The mind resounds
Still scared today

In shades of gray
The stomach churns
Still scared today
Darkness returns

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot
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dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
1 posted 2001-03-27 03:21 PM

How cool. These pantoun poems seem very difficult and I applaud you on creating this one.  Great read.  

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe
Katherine Chandler
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 280
Florida, USA
2 posted 2001-03-27 03:54 PM

Thank you, dragonpoe, the pattern is easier as you are looking at it. First one took me a whole day just about LOL.. I had fun with this one.   Kate

Blessings

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot
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