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River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world

0 posted 2003-09-16 11:37 PM



you make me wanna walk away
you make me feel sick today
I can't stand your ugly stares
you made me think nobody cares

your stench is only inches away
guess you decided to come out and play
Satan, quit haunting my dreams
you don't scare me with pitiful screams
Christ in me has made me strong
You think I'm still weak
but your dead wrong

get away from me Satan
this I command in the name of Christ
I will not give up with out a fight
you begin to laugh, then brought to silence
we shall no longer tolerate your sick defiance

goodbye snake
enjoy your trip to hell
the last trip you'll ever make
enjoy it well

© Copyright 2003 Bonnie Sue Bixler - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-09-17 01:30 PM


Bonnie - Welcome to PIP!
interesting write and I admire
your strength and faith
This, to me, is not dark
but highly spiritual
Please check your email for
a greeting from everyone here
at Passions!
xxoo

River
Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
2 posted 2003-09-18 12:02 PM


hey, thanx, for the card too, that was great what u did 2 it, i liked. lol, ur right, it's probably not...exactly dark, but i felt safer putting it here because it is one of the "darkest" poems i've written in awhile...uh...just forget it, lol. i'll find a dark one. soon. ttyl. God Bless.

                          

"The Red, it filters through" - Chevelle

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-09-18 03:24 AM


Oh no, this is lovely indeed
dark comes in many forms, m'friend
you have done beautifully
your most welcome
xxoo

River
Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
4 posted 2003-09-18 06:35 PM


lol, ok, groovy gravy, =) i think i like this site so far. its koolio =)

"The Red, it filters through" - Chevelle

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