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Hour of Darkness
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Hour of Darkness |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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In my hour of darkness I cry silent pleading but nobody listens there are only silver tears shining upon my windowpane she smiles at least someone smiles She knows me well her endless space occupied within worlds of worlds within ours yours and mine above and beyond cannot reach the depth of diamonds She is light consoling my fear welcoming me into her embrace like mother to child I fall freely exhausted This is all I have in this sanctuary of madness and in the dead shrill cry of nightfall I am enlightened at least by her watchful eye In my hour of darkness [This message has been edited by littlewing (09-13-2003 03:25 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm here too, anytime you want to scream or cry or rant. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sue?... "I cry silent pleading but nobody listens" Listening... "She is light consoling my fear welcoming me into her embrace like mother to child I fall freely exhausted This is all I have in this sanctuary of madness and in the dead shrill cry of nightfall I am enlightened at least by her watchful eye In my hour of darkness" I know this darkness... and you know that I'm here when you're in need of a light and a smile Love you, me sis...  When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-13-2003 03:53 PM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
If this is your personal experience...it just shouldn't be. You are too good to be going through this. and more  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-13-2003 04:27 PM).] |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
i'm sorry... this was juust a fantastic write, you made me cry, and that is hard to do sometimes. i am adding this for sure. "There never was a genius without a tincture of madness." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Goodness I feel awful now . . . I am sorry it is so sad, I adore the night but with it brings such utter loneliness Kacy, yes I do know and am grateful thank you Vicky, yes, as am I always (sista) thank you so so much Shara - well yea, sometimes, not all the time but mann who doesnt feel like this? thank you so much Matt - oh my maybe that is a good thing then - crying releases so much pent up madness . . . I am sorry and you are so sweet for saying what you have . . . I know that took a lot and thank you Thank you - the four of you have made me just feel so very special xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (09-13-2003 09:45 PM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Dark, this is... And you are smiled on... Dark, this is But, embraces await Dark, this is And you are consoled In this, your hour of darkness Time, is but a fleeting thing... I love this Baby. But then, I love both song and singer. (And you're still a beauty in this "dark" clothing.) "In looking Northward, I see a light" |
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Starsfalling Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94some where deep in the shadows |
i liked the write... i dont know you personally so i dont know whether or not this is true, but if it is im terribly sorry and send my sypathy -lance There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
lw, your good is now really good. Very nice flow and imagery here. Nice write. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Truly sad and truly moving. Sometimes it's hard to comment on things that are so emotionally charged, so all I will say is, it touched me and thank you. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Baby? that was beautiful . . . I love when you hug me and love you . . . *smiling now* lance thank you so much, well yes it is true, but also inspired by a song, "In My Hour Of Darkness" by Gram Parsons. An amazing tune and well I guess this is what I feel when I am alone Hey poe, coming from you that means a whole lot - thank you so very much Ryan, no, thank you for reading and caring Thank you guys . . . *smiling now again* xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (09-15-2003 04:22 AM).] |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
..."occupied within worlds of worlds within ours yours and mine above and beyond cannot reach the depth of diamonds" I loved this part especially... littlewing, you are great in the darkness. keep me crying.. Connie xx |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Connie . . . no, please no tears but thank you xxoo |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
awww, scary...it sounds like stuff i write about. i hope its not about u...if it is, i'm sorry...i know i dont know u well, but if you want to talk i will listen, i'm all about listening...it's what i do. u got my e-mail addy =). and by the way, even though it was sad *sniff* it was well written girl! great job! "The Red, it filters through" - Chevelle |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you River . . . what a sweet soul *smile* xxoo |
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