Dark Poetry #3 |
![]() ![]() |
what haven't you done |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
listen to my heart beat feel my heart break what have you done my body cannot take this watch it crumble into dust why am I no more what have you done drink my blood from me skin pale I've run dry my warmth is your own what have you done where is this place of darkness from where do you come taste my trembling fear what have you done I offer myself to you do what you will take so much that I fade away from sight forgotten by myself what have I done? I wrote this during choir. The mixture of music, depression and just me. And Mor-Estal thought of the title. Let go of your concept of reality and try mine for a while...then we'll see how long you last. [This message has been edited by teenpoet (09-12-2003 10:36 AM).] |
||
© Copyright 2003 Alicia Adams - All Rights Reserved | |||
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Alicia - yes beautiful choice on the title and this just aches . . . but? know that you are the one in control here nice writing xxoo |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |