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Dark Poetry #3
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Midnitesun
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Gaia
0 posted 2003-09-07 09:17 PM

snap went the mouse trap

little brown mouse in the house

my emotions snapped
© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
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1 posted 2003-09-08 07:35 AM

OMG Kacy, I know . . .
I once wrote something about a poor field mouse . . .
Nice to see you back here
*smile*
I just got here
xxoo
cusick
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since 2003-07-27
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2 posted 2003-09-08 11:10 AM

Just a few words and the message is clear. Love short poem. Maggie
Maddy vanD
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since 2003-09-06
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Newfoundland, Canada
3 posted 2003-09-08 11:48 PM

Now that's economical wordsmithing!!! amazing how clear the picture is with so few words.
Brava!!

Maddy
Poetry is not pretty....poetry is real
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