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Stood At the Edge
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Stood At the Edge I stood at the edge of trivialized, and minimalized. As you rushed to push me over the side. Habitating at the corner of Planning, and Hope Hope that things would change. Not to re-arrange your thoughts to stay with me but to make peace. Walking the streets of Dread. Not ever knowing what I did, or said?. Finding Accept Avenue. There was no me and there was no you. You knew, I knew there was no me there was no you. You knew, Yet still you held to your hate. Your appetite for revenge to sate. And while you gathered your band together, your band of theives that took from me my Peace. All the while I only asked release And now you wonder where is your peace? Stand at the edge of doubt, while you licked your wounds you sat, and pout. Your wounded pride. You trashed me 'til I couldn't see anything left for me to be. Trivialized and minimalized by you! So going to you in my defense what would you have done? Please tell, but that you won't You ignore, leave in suspense Told I am stupid, oh so dense. Accused of things that you are the one that does them Reflecting you. Your mirrored, vowed whim. Why must all be so grim? Why not forgive let us be a friend? Put to this war an end. Wrong was done from both sides why not let forgiveness abide? Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Shararose, I don't think for a minute you would let anyone treat you that way. Minimalized. Not you. . I might be wrong. Must read it again. Maggie |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Well Cusick...they have. I have feelings, and emotions, and I have a heart just like everyone else does, and you are right not anymore am I going to sit by and take it. A person does grow tired of cruel intentions being made toward them year after year. Thank you! SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-06-2003 04:52 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
A difficult subject to write about and you wrote it with power and strength Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown [This message has been edited by Kethry (09-06-2003 11:55 PM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Yes Kethry...it is. Just like right now. You just did it. You just minimalized what I have wrote...I got it. Thank you? No thank you. "Oh yes in all it's severity and anger." It's severe when it happens to you year after year along with the trivializing. I have a question for you. HOw would it feel if it were you? You never comment on any of my poems then the time comes where you can make a dig and you take it..I have to wonder if you aren't the same as this person that does this, or you are close PALS! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-06-2003 08:11 PM).] |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Keeping this.  many hugs. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
 Shara @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Maddy vanD Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 99Newfoundland, Canada |
Actually, judging by this piece I would say you are rather good at this thing called poetry. I liked this poem for its depth, the way the protagonists' feelings are exposed. very well written. Maddy |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thank you Maddy, but this is not a subject that's easy for me. In no way do I lift it high as something to brag about. It is a very painful part of my life, and it should halt. Bless you for the critique. I appreciate your words. Since I know nothing about poetry I just write what comes to my mind.  Kethry why did you change your comment? This quote is no longer there. "Oh yes in all it's severity and anger." I do thank you for changing your mind, and editing your message. I appreciate your change of heart. Love, Shara @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Shara, you have NO idea how much I relate to this and yes beautifum message - hoping it occurs for you Accused of things that you are the one that does them Reflecting you. very much so xxoo |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Bless ya kiddo...It is much appreciated when someone understands where you are coming from. Helps when someone believes in you. and more Shara @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Shararose, now I know what your message meant. I am so relieved that it wasn't something I said. Luv. Maggie |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Hugs Maggie...It's ok, really I believe you, and I luv ya, too. It's no problem.  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
Terri, This was great!! Adding this for sure. I'm sorry people suck, you are such a kind soul you don't deserve this one single bit. "There never was a genius without a tincture of madness." |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Oh eor it's so nice to see you posting. Thanks for this comment. I appreciate your words to encourage. I hope you are well! and more  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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