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Dark Poetry #3

roads I walk

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2003-09-06 04:59 AM

The roads I walk are deadly
Surrounded by fire and flame
The struggle is hard frought with pain
As one has too battle constantly to remain sane
With no one to blame, everyday the same
Time is lost/Wisdom gained
As all become trained, Masters of the art
That will one day utterly tear them apart
And with these words the battle starts.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

1 posted 2003-09-06 09:50 AM

Jeremiah, really like the direction in your write. The journey thru life and the wisdom attained, only thru time. We cannot change this medium we're in. Only thru time do we learn the wisdom of truth and how to deal with the meaning of life: Which we all are a part of. Real nice thought, direction and write. Enjoyed.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

iMMuNe
Junior Member

since 2002-07-23

Posts 49
Maine, USA

2 posted 2003-09-06 10:17 AM

Hey Jer,
I noticed that you have a habbit of writing about the future, or of an oncoming war that will destroy something or other. This habbits a good one! Keep writing man, im enjoying your writes.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-09-07 10:12 AM

Man I walk the same path and yet, I stumble
nice write
xxoo

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

4 posted 2003-09-07 10:19 AM

Jeremiah Your poems take the same path as mine, we could start a rebellion between us. Great write. Maggie

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