Dark Poetry #3 |
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roads I walk |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
The roads I walk are deadly Surrounded by fire and flame The struggle is hard frought with pain As one has too battle constantly to remain sane With no one to blame, everyday the same Time is lost/Wisdom gained As all become trained, Masters of the art That will one day utterly tear them apart And with these words the battle starts. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Jeremiah, really like the direction in your write. The journey thru life and the wisdom attained, only thru time. We cannot change this medium we're in. Only thru time do we learn the wisdom of truth and how to deal with the meaning of life: Which we all are a part of. Real nice thought, direction and write. Enjoyed. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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iMMuNe Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49Maine, USA |
Hey Jer, I noticed that you have a habbit of writing about the future, or of an oncoming war that will destroy something or other. This habbits a good one! Keep writing man, im enjoying your writes. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Man I walk the same path and yet, I stumble nice write xxoo |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Jeremiah Your poems take the same path as mine, we could start a rebellion between us. Great write. Maggie |
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