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My Whole World Upside Down
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My Whole World Upside Down |
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RennieandBoo Junior Member
since 2003-09-02
Posts 47Florida! |
I'm a bride inside my eyes Anything that I see is someone I can be I wish I can cry every time I see you Oh why; why did you leave me like that? I felt my heart go down with a splat My whole world upside down I wish you could see What you've done to me You told me a lie I could see you clearly in my mind's eye My whole world upside down My whole world upside down Oh why did you leave me for another girl? What does she got that I don't have? I wish you could see; what you've done to me You said you loved me Oh how could you do this to me? My whole world is upside down Upside down, Upside down |
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Encarta Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 101My homeland is not of the world |
This is a great poem...it stills sends a shiver down my spine. you did a great job portraying the emotions. Also, on a side note, welcome to piptalk  I'm sure you'll like this place. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Rennie - nice entrance! Welcome to PIP! I have already read you and you write with pain but in each write I find something positive: Anything that I see is someone I can be EXACTLY and yes I do know this well Check your email for a special freeting from all of us here at Passions! xxoo |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Very pretty :-) |
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