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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Fear of faith Forgotten hope The darkest place I make my home Survive and live Continued breath Glowing image The shinny land In the cell Harmonic sleep Advance of thought Warning peep Accident unintent Practice finger Callous prick Stronger thread Sturdy cloth A little trick I keep in mind Dead the sick Survival kind Only a game Broken rules Natural me Set it free a trickle of music from a well |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Very intriguing!! *i can't spell that* You woke me right up after a long day of work!! I enjoyed this piece very much! *add* ~Alicia |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx blackhalo, When someone adds my work to their library it makes me feel good. Thanx again. Craig a trickle of music from a well |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
you amaze me |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
I shall read this some more . It is something I an not sure of. But It is good. Maggie |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
I shall read this some more . It is something I an not sure of. But It is good. Maggie |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
Fear of faith Forgotten hope The darkest place I make my home I could really relate to this part. Beautiful piece Craig. I read this a while back but wasn't able to reply. I try to read all your work. It's inspiring.  Lex  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Craig, I adore this Practice finger Callous prick Stronger thread Sturdy cloth but please elaborate for me *blush* I am reading into it wayy too much thank you xxoo |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Nice write gis, I had to read a few times, and really liked the split " accident unintent" used. Nice lines. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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xfisscox New Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 1ma |
seems i like what you had to say, faith isn't we all want. seems you agree with that |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Hey everybody thanx. I just started college and havent had a lot of time for much, so Im a lil rusty. eor- thanx. its nice to see you back cusick- take your time Lexy- thanx. Im glad you enjoyed it and find inspiration in it. I guess Im doing my job as a writer. littlewing- your at times one of the most difficult to reply to. I believe the point I was trying to get at was no matter what happens, or how low it gets, just keep on. The part about the cloth is about the elements of music coming together to make a song the rest of the poem pretty much finishes up about pushing obstacles out of my way as a musician. mysticpoe- thanx. I try. xfisscox- and yes your right. I dont want faith. I want action. All the faith in the world wont fo anything for you if its not backed up with some kind of action. a trickle of music from a well |
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