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SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-08-31 08:58 PM

Sifting,
and
changing places
in my mind,
because of your dark stare
Sifting through, and changing
because I did not, and do not
understand why you didn't care?
From love...to a bye bye
not ever even knowing why.
Always sifting, and changing
to accomadate you
through all the hurt.
How do you justify
your way when
all I asked
was for you to tell me
what went wrong,
but you never had
anything to say.
Your constant
taunting,
and trashings
keeping it all going
Then you have
the nerve
to say
I
let ghosts keep
haunting?
If you wanted me to go
Why did you keep coming
around opening up the wounds
again, and again?
Year after year?
Did you fear
I would do as I said and walk away?
Why do I always have to sift through
all the hurt,
and keep changing places in my emotions
in my mind so I can survive all the tauntings
That you call my imagined ghostly past
diggin' up bones, hauntings.

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-08-31 09:58 PM

Why do I always have to sift through
all the hurt,
and keep changing places in my emotions
in my mind so I can survive all the tauntings
That you call my imagined ghostly past
diggin' up bones, hauntings.

I absolutely loved the above lines. Nicely done. The wording in the begining was a little too much at some parts.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-09-01 01:15 AM

Wonderful!

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-09-01 11:55 AM

Thanks to both of you...

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Lexy I appreciate so much you telling me about being too much in the beginning. Could you make some suggestions. I would very much appreciate any help.

Kaoru- Thanks so much for reading, and I am glad you liked!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

4 posted 2003-09-01 04:17 PM

Shararose, such a poignant poem. One to make you think, which is good. Maggie

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

5 posted 2003-09-01 06:35 PM

Cusick, and thank you.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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