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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
now a shell his ego sucked out, long ago stumbling cruel passages of massaged concrete, showing years that ate the layers. one by one perfect chariots - waited and called their day their way colored in desire, mixed with hues their colors also the colors we knew this man showed no color. no one noticed the shame, drained from special servings no hues, was his name. brightly colored egos eager to move on, they lose the moments meaning of life’s beyond. for every soul committed and every page done, the book we all have entered reads. our passing - for the total sum. If nothing is something |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jesus poe . . . this is brilliant . . . reminded me having my brain sucked dry by society . . . xxoo |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
This poor man seems to be in torment and nobody cares. A very interesting read. Maggie |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Thanks again littlewing. society did do a job on this person, sad. thanks again for stopping by. mysticpoe maggie, a little bit of us in that old man and a little bit of him in us. left for who to, dare care. Then it will be our turn in some way? Thanks for stopping by again. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
littlewing said what i am thnking, brillant, absoutly brillant, adding this fo sure! "There never was a genius without a tincture of madness." |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
"no hues,was his name" Well said! I love the relation it brought to mind..... Thanks! Click |
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