Symptom Sally never saw it coming

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Dark Poetry #3

Symptom Sally never saw it coming

Gavin
Junior Member

since 2003-06-22

Posts 47

0 posted 2003-08-27 06:29 PM

symptom sally,
never wandered far from the gally,
they threw her in the barreled bin with the rats inside the alley,
the rats at home inside her eyes, which now was home to the valleyed alley,
they breed and feed inside the sockets and offer pockets to the rally, that lies in the eyes with the rats who despise and often criticize poor symptom sally,
but then a god took her sight and left symptom sally's plight,
to the hands of the captains of commander's with sanders in their holy sights,
and they asked her if she had a stomach to in which she did reply,
symptom sally ripped her hunger from the holes, where the alley used to be her eyes,
symptom sally cired for hours with the pain inside her skull,
she screamed and reemed and tried to dream
but without her eyes the light never seemed to dull,
she couldn't close them and she hadn't chose them
but the thoughts never left her head,
that if she could break them and maybe make them then she'd be better off left for dead,
so sypmtom sally closed her holes and howled at the sun,
she jumped to rivers and burned the poison set it off and then she runned,
where are you going my precious little head said the nicotine man with a beheaded head, but sally never left her dream and so the guilltione man was now better off left for dead,
ha, said sally, with poison in her gleam, i'm the one with funeral eyes so its my turn to yearn the dream, and with mechanical smiles and funeral piles the eyes wandered back into the gally,
hello eyes, said symptom sally, but the rats had severely damaged what was left of sally's sight, so she ate her vision and killed the vermon and was never again left inside the night,

sally loves to love the right to fight the light of might despite what visions may decide..........so symptom sally had her fill and never saw the pesticide.........

*no actual relation to anyone, just liked the name symptom sally

[This message has been edited by Gavin (08-27-2003 06:36 PM).]

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

1 posted 2003-08-29 09:24 AM

Enjoyed this a lot Gavin, Nice write.

mysticpoe

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then everything is
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click1
Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 152
usa

2 posted 2003-08-30 06:54 PM

What a web of words ..BRAVO...!
and Thanx!

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