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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Silhouette of black upon white empty canvas in the moonlight A single drop frozen by the tip-tap of time Brazen cheeks flushed and lined Ohhh . . . how they stare numb in the deep, dead of night Someone has stolen once brazen sight A still life absurdity brush in hand Paying homage to nothing left to understand Painting a portrait a palette of fears Sabel strung bliss black on blue in years Mahogany hollow once two rivers of bliss Now birth quivering tears never to be quelled by a kiss [This message has been edited by littlewing (08-25-2003 02:21 AM).] |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Very beautifully written. Wicked write. I'm kind of out of it now, so perhaps later I will look very in depth at it and give you something more. But it left an impact on me. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
I get that felling of, solitude, like when sunlight mesmerize's the stillness of the past. When it shines on/in a chosen place/thing at the right moment. Nice writing. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Such a lovely write. Rather sad at the end. Full of impact. Maggie |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
this is a sad write, i can't tell if it is a good thing to not be overcome by a kiss, because i am, but either or, fantastic write "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ryan, nuff said thank you so much - as long as you came away from it with something is all that matters to me thank you poe, insightful there . . . yes solitude and the shining is the moonlight, but also the sun, as you pointed out to me. That;s why I love crituques, you see things in your writing you didnt even know were there . . . thank you Thank you Maggie, yes sad . . . *smile* YOU inspired me to write this in one of your threads! Thank you eor . . . I don't think it's a good thing to not be overcome by a kiss . . . and yes, sad thank you Thanks guys xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
it just feels like something that had its time and now feels strange but then again, what do i know? but i know it moved as it read to me |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Michele . . . your not too far off there xxoo |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
"a palette of fears" Truly.... Well done. Click |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
This is sad...:'( A still life absurdity brush in hand Paying homage to nothing left to understand Seems there's nothing left to feel. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Sometimes I get you and inkedgoddess confused.. I don't know why.. But I realize it before I respond, which is good.. Well, that and the pictures are a dead give away..oh, and the writes, too  This is really good, I loooove it! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks click! Shara - definitely, sometimes there isnt thank you Kaoru - thats pretty funny sometimes I get you confused with Raph, I dont know why - maybe its the writing , oh but the pictures definitely make me realize. LOL Thank you Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (08-26-2003 08:04 PM).] |
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