Dark Poetry #3 |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
You came from the dust carried by the winds known as trilogy and the truth sealed the future covered by ocean forgiveness like the depths within hollowed out beginnings were allowed and we accepted the delivered our memory sealed with traveled darkness eluding the difference sent to us we and dream as one which laces our souls to come they knew this toll gathering the hymns like winters place our journey begins, again. If nothing is something |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
and yet our journy begins again, beautifully written! adding this "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Thanks again eor. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
mystic, this is beautiful, gave me a sense of change, which is a good thing xxoo |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Thanks for reading littlewing, Glad you enjoyed. mysticpoe If nothing is something then everything is our thoughts and feelings and all that exists. [This message has been edited by mysticpoe (08-23-2003 12:59 PM).] |
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Annie Junior Member
since 2003-07-23
Posts 42Seattle, WA |
"We and dream as one which laces our souls to come . ." Beautiful, haunting............................ "Well I know, these voices must be my soul." -Dave Matthews- |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
This alone is a pretty darned good write... "You came from the dust carried by the winds known as trilogy and the truth sealed the future" Cool! (And a thank you for rummaging around in the archives) [This message has been edited by wranx (08-24-2003 12:11 AM).] |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Wow, very beautiful write, I quite enjoyed it. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Thank you Annie for stopping by. the best with your new site. wranx, as always, greatly enjoy your visits. Mad_Hatter, appreciate you stopping by and commenting. again thanks all. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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