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The Crossing |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Like moonlit droplets from the mist so followed, a roaming cloud, from which it exist's it see's me I know the moments are slow I know, you know with that soft searching glow calls, drifting of thoughts to hear do you know me I know why your here I can see you, you know the visit, the just I know you can see me I know that touch I know, you know the crossing, those months I know - I knew you once. If nothing is something then everything is our thoughts and feelings and all that exists. [This message has been edited by mysticpoe (07-15-2003 04:06 PM).] |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is a great poem. i enjoyed it very much. I hope to see alot more from you. keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Thanks Jeremiah. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
Wow, this was a really great poem. Thanks for sharing. |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
wow...great one, enjoyed reading... |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Thanks IcyFlame and MellonCollie, I appreciate both of you for sharing. Glad you enjoyed. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts |
"I know, you know the crossing, those months I know - I knew you once." Very cool poem, Mystic!  Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Thanks Ladybug, I'm from Mass. also. Glad you enjoyed it. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
so beautifully sad, as alyways...those last two lines were great... "i know, i knew you once..." "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Great poem. The two last lines are my favorite. Very nicely done. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
eor and Mad_Hatter, thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks again for commenting. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts |
Hey Mystic, that's cool you're from Mass too! It seems there are a few of us around this site, hee hee  Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Mystic- Well done, very much enjoyed this one. It had an unusual style that drew me. Enjoyed reading it tremendously. Tomer |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
LadyBug, thanks again for stopping by. Hope our coming winter season is a bit kinder to us this time around. Thanks again. Tomer, Thanks for reading and commenting. Glad you enjoyed it. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
Very nice... One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world... |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Thanks Rdz9. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
mystic - are you speaking of a visit from the other side here? This is what it reads to me: I know why your here I can see you, you know the visit, the just I know you can see me I know that touch I know, you know the crossing, those months I know - I knew you once. Beautiful writing xxoo |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
That's it littlewing, thanks again. Where is your poetry. I want to read. really appreciate. mysticpoe If nothing is something then everything is our thoughts and feelings and all that exists. [This message has been edited by mysticpoe (08-23-2003 02:37 PM).] |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
I loved it, thank you Maggie |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
yw - me? I am scattered all over this place lol . . . most of my parts are in Open some in Dark, Sanctuary . . . but havent written in awhile you would have to do a search lol sorry |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Thank you Maggie. littlewing, I'll start searching. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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