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SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-08-21 11:45 AM

Zeros, and Nil

Zeros
add up
to
zero
still.
So
what
from there?
It's still
nil.
Zero
was
all
I
added
up to.
So
I,
Nil,
will
be
a
zero
and
dis-
a-
ppear
from
You!

*POOF*

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

1 posted 2003-08-21 01:47 PM

I'm here to ressurect you. Good fun Marge. Maggie

eor
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since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2003-08-21 05:04 PM

just don't dissapear from me or youe writing! great one...adding this

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-08-21 06:44 PM

Thank you Maggie for the comment. I appreciate your thoughts.

Thanks eor... you're a sweetie pie, and I've been prayin'..well more like wishful thinkin,' for you, and your girl. Keep the faith. It will get better! Sending

for the 2 of you. Well prayin' for me is like thinking..it's the way I pray..just in thoughts that seem like wishful thinkin.' I know.. silly me.

Bless ya bunches,
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2003-08-21 11:55 PM

well whatever you call lack in skill must be ungodly impossible. Nice write. Itll make a nice addition.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

5 posted 2003-08-22 11:00 AM

Thank you Itchy. I appreciate your kind words. Feels like they are mixed feelings though. I trust you Itchy, and other people, too and I'd like to say if you don't like something please feel free to tell me what's wrong, and make suggestions. I just don't want people to be mean or harsh....that's the only reason I said "Please be kind." I have never been to any kind of classes, or any kind of education about writing, or writing poetry so I would love your productive criticsm. I wish someone would teach me. Well thanks anyways.......

SharaRose @-->--

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-08-23 01:57 PM

Shara - this is one amazing write here missy . . . I love the form and the way you execute . . . although I disagree on the part of you being nil
*smile*
xxoo

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

7 posted 2003-08-23 06:36 PM

Thanks Little Wing...that means so much. Bless ya bunches for this. I appreciate these words more than you know.

SharaRose @-->--

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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-08-24 10:18 AM

*smile*
thank you

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

9 posted 2003-08-24 11:36 AM

Thank *YOU!* It was much appreciated!!

SharaRose @-->--

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