Dark Poetry #3 |
Zeros, and Nil |
SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Zeros, and Nil Zeros add up to zero still. So what from there? It's still nil. Zero was all I added up to. So I, Nil, will be a zero and dis- a- ppear from You! *POOF* Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
I'm here to ressurect you. Good fun Marge. Maggie |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
just don't dissapear from me or youe writing! great one...adding this "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thank you Maggie for the comment. I appreciate your thoughts. Thanks eor... you're a sweetie pie, and I've been prayin'..well more like wishful thinkin,' for you, and your girl. Keep the faith. It will get better! Sending for the 2 of you. Well prayin' for me is like thinking..it's the way I pray..just in thoughts that seem like wishful thinkin.' I know.. silly me. Bless ya bunches, SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
well whatever you call lack in skill must be ungodly impossible. Nice write. Itll make a nice addition. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thank you Itchy. I appreciate your kind words. Feels like they are mixed feelings though. I trust you Itchy, and other people, too and I'd like to say if you don't like something please feel free to tell me what's wrong, and make suggestions. I just don't want people to be mean or harsh....that's the only reason I said "Please be kind." I have never been to any kind of classes, or any kind of education about writing, or writing poetry so I would love your productive criticsm. I wish someone would teach me. Well thanks anyways....... SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Shara - this is one amazing write here missy . . . I love the form and the way you execute . . . although I disagree on the part of you being nil *smile* xxoo |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thanks Little Wing...that means so much. Bless ya bunches for this. I appreciate these words more than you know. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
*smile* thank you |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thank *YOU!* It was much appreciated!! SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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