Dark Poetry #3 |
Pain... |
Lonely Shadow Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128Virginia |
overwhelming sadness tears slowly falling eyes full of heartache heart shattered and torn the agony overwhelming endless void consuming will the pain ever stop? does god know I'm alive? if I'm such a good person why do I feel like a monster lives I touch lying in ruin every woman's gaze turned cringing at my very presence why do I deserve this hell? will this nightmare end? prayers go unanswered dreams shattered in the night joy ripped from my lifeless heart only a living corpse remains Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death. |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I know this feeling entirely too well. Good write, very emotional... ~Alicia |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
These are the depths. Look up. God is the one that can love when humans can't, because we are human so we fall short of meeting expectations of other people because we are human, and make mistakes. I know. More advice than a comment...so I apologize for that, but I just felt urged to say that. No not a preachy thing just the voice of experiences in my life. SharaRose @->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Oh dear, this sounds so sad.But I don't believe that prayers go unanswered. Try again. Maggie |
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