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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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ELMO STEPS BACK INTO THE DARKNESS!!!! DID YA'LL MISS ME? THE BEAST The beast within, is coming out. Tearing me up, as I scream and shout. Come back to me, and send the monster away. Come back to me, and forever stay. Please I beg, and rid this fear. Hold me tight, and stay right here. The beast within, eatin' me to nothing. Turnin' my heart black, when it could have been something. Come back to me, and send the monster away. Come back to me, and forever stay. I need you. I want you bad. Took for granted, what we once had. I'm on bended knee, as I plead to the sky. Come back to me, or let me die! ~This is like a song to me, playing over & over in my head~  ELMO"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" [This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (08-19-2003 01:33 PM).] |
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Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
cute, and talented. I like the idea behind this poem however I think the wording (vocabulary) could've been expanded upon a bit more so that the words were more specific. thanks for posting. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yea I know--thanx for replying--this was written like all my stuff is, in like 5min--lol--I write a lot of stuff really fast, then sometimes go back & brush up a few pieces at a time  ELMO |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
good write, seems like you poured a lot of emotion into this...i like it "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx--All my stuff comes straight from the heart, whatever I'm feeling at the moment--It may mean nothing to you, but it means the world to me & I think that's the whole point of poetry (therapy 4 me)  ELMO"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
we don't always know what will bring the monsters out from under the bed or closet...if we knew we could run!! does play like a song... sorry to say I know this beast also...What DOES he EAT!?!? Click |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yea but the not knowing is all the fun in it!! He eats me! LOL I'm glad you could relate in this somehow!! ELMO"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" [This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (08-22-2003 07:51 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
KT - Took for granted, what we once had. I'm on bended knee, as I plead to the sky. ahhh . . . yep every night . . . I felt this one, I did xxoo |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx LittleWing!!  ELMO"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" |
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