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When Love Gets Bad
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When Love Gets Bad |
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TwoSided Junior Member
since 2003-07-06
Posts 19 |
With elegant grace and a misshapen face She glides across the waters of sincerity To lance my heart with here words a silvery flowered hate the hurt she inflicts upon me is most ghostly but deserving With supple cheeks and wispy locks of golden rayed sun light She glances at me and I at here but we see past one another My beauty my Lover my Mistress most cruel Will you undue this cruse you’ve put on me? No love in our cession of tasteless lovemaking Parting for us would not be sweat sorrow But some thing of joy and long awaited smiles Now she begins to grow weary of me And my eyes do tear for I wish to take my leave But we are like two stones logged against each other Neither will budge to one gives a little But like stones, we stand strong and stubborn So we both shall stay in this realatstionship that failed Until one of us gives up one day And says, “I think it’s over for you and I” (I read ero's poem and I got hit with inperastion. So in a way this poem's really for him....I guess...er...ya) |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
You have some real nice lines here. Surprised you haven't received more of a response? Nice write. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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Magia_negra Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 77CA, USA |
Yes, i like it too. ...reminds me of the feeling when i am stuck between love and hatred... ...somos los locos para siempre |
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TwoSided Junior Member
since 2003-07-06
Posts 19 |
I think it was the pink font it wasn't meant to be pink but I made a mistake! But thank you both you're comments all ways bring a smile to my face  |
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