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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys 
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Damn I don’t think it is fair or right What am I not good enough to meet you old friends? What the f, any night but tonight What the f does that mean I would jump at the chance to have you meet my old friends And plus you are not going to come home tonight Of course I said 'be good' You gave me a look as if to spite me I hope for our sake you don't spite me The rage inside me I mean space is one thing but Getting waisted with old friends and not wanting me there What the hell am I supposed to think? Flowers and candy, a f-ing tea party All I want to do is scream out loud Am I not good enough, huh, am I, HUH! DON'T F-ING PLAY WIHT ME I’m way to fragile See I am already breaking ------- sorry, this just happened like 2 seconds ago, i needed my thearpy... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Hey eor, been there, done that. Don't want to kill you with cliches right now. But this is realy in your face stuff. I think I'll make a copy to forward. Outstanding emotional outlet-i-n-g. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Intense. I like it. But of course I would. hehe. Another addition. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
well I know how it is, when you JUST go through something and your mind is screaming you just just scribble it all down. Your anger shows. I liked this. So human.  |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Man, that just ain't cool.. but the poem is.. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
damn i love you all for the fact you understand me...thank you so much...you all mean more to me than you know "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Human indeed. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
i dont know if i am human at all, sometimes i feel like an outsider "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Outsider? But? Well I just think it's better to get it on the outside than it is to keep it in, and it shares with the rest of us to remind us we aren't the only ones that feel this way. That's purpose, and that's reason for you!! I know your writes always make me feel someone out there understands. Which *always* helps!!  SharaRose @--<-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
Thank you!  "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
*no legible letters to describe the noise I made, at least not in a very strange way...* This piece was amazing, I love the structure and the flow, and VERY well driven! Yet again, *astounded* Add. (Not much of yours I've read ISN'T in my library... How'd I miss this one?) ~Alicia |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Let no one put you down Eor, stand up and be counted. Maggie |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
I hope you'll over this, I'm ready to read again. later mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Matt - nice vent and no, it isnt cool at all I understand your ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh *smile* xxoo |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
sooo proud of them...so embarassed by us..where do we fit in?? nice job of telling it like it SOMEtimes is... and again, well done... thanx! Click |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
Awesome. That's a feeling I can relate too... |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
Alicia-thanks as always, i'm not sure why so much of my stuff is in your library, but thanks!  Maggie-Thanks, i'll try, but sometimes it is hard Poe-of course tthanks for stopping by, mucho apreaciated!! Littlewing-thanks, sometimes you gotta get these things out, and passions is my thearpy, thanks for listening!! Click1 and Magebeast-thanks for stopping by, this is the first u have seen of you two, thanks!!!! THANK YOU ALL!! "There never was a genius without a tincture of madness." |
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