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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
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Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2001-03-04 10:12 AM


The soft wispy clouds
That hang in the air
Bring me amazement
As I sit and stare
At all of the colors
In their countless hues
To describe now this beauty
No words can one use

But describe it I will
Or at least take a chance
To share with you now
All the beauty I glance
While sitting alone
I watch the light dance
Through all of the clouds
As I'm put in a trance

Awe struck by colors
All caught in my eyes
I make it my duty
To tell you no lies
I thank the great heavens
For this wonderful prize
That gives my soul peace
As I watch the sunrise

G. A. Webb


Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't



[This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (edited 03-04-2001).]

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Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY
1 posted 2001-03-04 01:24 PM


This was truely beautiful*S*
Temptress*Moon



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2001-03-04 04:06 PM


G. A. Webb,
entrancing!
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Broken
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since 2000-03-12
Posts 271
The woods
3 posted 2001-03-04 07:50 PM



Nice mood in this one, very vividly.
And I agree.

~Broken~

Oh God! Why the angels fall first?

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2001-03-04 08:03 PM


Vivid beauty, therefore a vivid emotion...
Poetic beauty Mr. Webb, wonderful!
Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
5 posted 2001-03-06 08:19 AM


Thank you all so much, I'm glad you liked this. I don't usually write observational poems (I only have a couple that I've done), but I couldn't help myself when I saw the sunrise the other day. Too bad you guys couldn't have been here to see it because it was simply breath taking. Anyways, thanks again!

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


Kerri S
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 61
Rhode Island
6 posted 2001-03-06 02:51 PM


What a wonderful poem this was to read. It truely open's the minds eye to see what the writer saw.

Kerri

MiseryDivine
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)
7 posted 2001-03-07 12:43 PM


beautifully written!..... such a lovely vision! great poem!
Verve
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
8 posted 2001-03-09 04:07 AM



Such simplicity ... and yet you wielded it with such poetic elegance ...
Beautiful ...

I think you have made little miracles of life like these even more so wonderful.

Very very nicely written.

G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
9 posted 2001-03-10 11:39 AM


Kerri S, MiseryDivine & Verve: Thank you all so much. It truely warms my heart to know that you like my work. It's funny really, I didn't see this as being one of my better pieces, just an interesting one. I guess I was wrong...lol...oh well! :-) Thanks again!

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
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houston,tx
10 posted 2012-01-16 04:51 PM


this reminds me of my sunset poem its in the teen poetry forum though
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