Dark Poetry #3 |
Sunrise |
G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
The soft wispy clouds That hang in the air Bring me amazement As I sit and stare At all of the colors In their countless hues To describe now this beauty No words can one use But describe it I will Or at least take a chance To share with you now All the beauty I glance While sitting alone I watch the light dance Through all of the clouds As I'm put in a trance Awe struck by colors All caught in my eyes I make it my duty To tell you no lies I thank the great heavens For this wonderful prize That gives my soul peace As I watch the sunrise G. A. Webb Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't [This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (edited 03-04-2001).] |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
This was truely beautiful*S* Temptress*Moon I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
G. A. Webb, entrancing! Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Nice mood in this one, very vividly. And I agree. ~Broken~ Oh God! Why the angels fall first? |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Vivid beauty, therefore a vivid emotion... Poetic beauty Mr. Webb, wonderful! Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Thank you all so much, I'm glad you liked this. I don't usually write observational poems (I only have a couple that I've done), but I couldn't help myself when I saw the sunrise the other day. Too bad you guys couldn't have been here to see it because it was simply breath taking. Anyways, thanks again! G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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Kerri S Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 61Rhode Island |
What a wonderful poem this was to read. It truely open's the minds eye to see what the writer saw. Kerri |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
beautifully written!..... such a lovely vision! great poem! |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Such simplicity ... and yet you wielded it with such poetic elegance ... Beautiful ... I think you have made little miracles of life like these even more so wonderful. Very very nicely written. |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Kerri S, MiseryDivine & Verve: Thank you all so much. It truely warms my heart to know that you like my work. It's funny really, I didn't see this as being one of my better pieces, just an interesting one. I guess I was wrong...lol...oh well! :-) Thanks again! G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
this reminds me of my sunset poem its in the teen poetry forum though |
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