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Dark Poetry #3

forever coasting

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2003-08-16 03:14 PM

veins crawl
searching forgiveness – appalled
with leaves falling
the new ones
don’t call

overwhelming
this tree
branches now lost
dichotomy
with a cost

splendor consequences
they all thought
forever coasting
into the other
or do they not

look at me
when the axis knows
air will moisten
direction shown

you too
from the possible
the past fades
of afternoon sultry.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-08-16 04:19 PM

ooo...so pretty yet eerie. I loved it.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2003-08-16 07:07 PM

i know this is really good, i probally shouldent even be replyng right now, cause if you read my reacent post you can tell im pissed, but i want to let ypu know this is good, i'll read it agaon later when i calm down and really respond

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

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